Monday, 21 November 2016
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How to write an article
Paper 2 Part 2 -
Article
AN ARTICLE is usually written for an English-language magazine or newsletter,
and the reader is assumed to have similar interests to the writer. The
main purpose is to inform, interest and engage the reader, so there
should be some opinion or comment.
Hints
- Add
a short title to catch the reader's attention. Make sure
it is relevant. You can use the one in the question or invent one of your
own.
- Introduce
the topic.
Although you don't know the readers personally, you can address them
directly and ask them a rhetorical question. It helps to involve them.
- Divide
your report into sections according to the input. One or two
paragraphs will do.
- Develop
the ideas in
the task input. Remember .
- Use
a personal or more neutral style, but not formal (you
might use contractions).
- It
is important that you show a range of structures.
- Give examples
where appropriate to bring your article to life
- Use humour
where appropriate.
- Give a
conclusion and summary in the last paragraph.
Useful language for
an article
Involving the reader
- Just
imagine...
- Have
you ever...?
- How
would you feel if ...?
- Are
you one of those people who ...?
- If
the answer is ..., you should....
- What
would live be like if...
- ...
Making the article lively and interesting
- I
was absolutely terrified when I realised...
- More importantly,
it was something I...
- Not surprisingly,
it's a good way of raising money.
- The
tent was worryingly small for three people!
- It
was the most amazing experience I have ever had.
- ...
Developing your points
- Let's
start with ...
- Another
advantage of ...
- On
top of that, ...
- ...
Giving your own opinion
- I
think that / In my opinion ...
- It
seems to me that ...
- If
you ask me, ...
- To
my mind...
- ...
Model questions and
answers
Article- Model
question 1
TASK
You see this announcement on an English-language website.
Articles wanted
A charity event to remember
What is the most unusual way you've raised money for charity? How did you do it? What did you have to do? Was the event a success? Would you do it again?
Write us an article answering these questions.
We will publish the best articles on our website.
What is the most unusual way you've raised money for charity? How did you do it? What did you have to do? Was the event a success? Would you do it again?
Write us an article answering these questions.
We will publish the best articles on our website.
Write your article in 140-190 words in
an appropriate style.
Article - Model
answer 1
A charity
event to remember
So why
did I decide to do a 90-km walk in six days along the Great Wall of China?
Well, the reason was that our local children's hospital needed to raise money
or it would be close. However, I didn't realise how big a challenge it would
be.
Before I
went, I thought that I would be walking along a flat surface but when I saw the
Great Wall, my heart sank. Part of the time we would be trekking up hundreds of
high steps and, worryingly, some of the paths had steep falls on either side
and there was nowhere to go because we were surrounded by mountains and
forests. However, after a while, I started to love the experience. I was in one
of the most amazing places on earth and the views were incredible.
In the
end, the adventure was a great success. The hospital was delighted because a
group of us managed to raise several thousand pounds.
Would I
be keen to help the hospital again next year? Yes, but I think I'll try and
find an easier challenge next time!
Thursday, 3 November 2016
Essay writing tips
•All three subjects that are mentioned in the thesis statement are covered (in the order given).
•Written in first person.
•No
contractions
•Includes a linking sentence at the end of the introduction (in the form of a
question) to connect it to the rest of the essay. The rest of the essay is a
response to this question.
•Includes a
TOPIC SENTENCE at the beginning of each paragraph.
•Uses
a range of
formal connectives (to connect paragraphs AND
ideas within paragraphs).
•The conclusion is the answer to the question asked in the last line
of the introduction (with the detail of the answer given throughout the essay).
The introduction needs to include the following three components:
1.General statement
2.Thesis statement
3.Linking question
Sample essay
Obesity is a serious global problem in
today's society, especially among young people. I
think high rates of alcohol consumption, addiction to fast food and a
lack of adequate teaching in schools is to blame for this situation. So
what can be done about it?
Alcohol consumption in the West has been
increasing alarmingly.
This
is an important reason why people have been getting fatter, and a
simple solution for this problem is to cut down on the amount of alcohol
consumed.
However, addiction to fast food is also a serious
problem. It is
so popular that it
has become an addiction, and
is a
major cause of young people getting fatter. This kind of food is very fattening
and parents
need to limit how much fast food their chiildren eat.
Furthermore, the schools have not done their job well.
Kids don't
understand the connection between excessiveb drinking, fast food and being obese.
Schools need to introduce special lessons on good diet and healthy
living.
In conclusion, I think
parents
and schools need to do a better job of explaining the relationship between
drinking alcohol, eating too much fast food and becoming obese. If adequate education is
made available, this problem can be solved in the future.
(207 words)
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